Why I did not write Best Offer Wins, by Marisa Kashino
If you know me you know that I do not generally like “commercial fiction.” We could debate what is meant by this term, but for now, let’s just say I like few works by living authors, and even fewer who publish with major presses (Celadon, an imprint of Macmillan) and probably none that have been a Good Morning America Book Club pick. But I did enjoy Best Offer Wins! I enjoyed it in the same way I enjoy hate-watching some streaming limited series focused on the sort of characters that I would not like in real life but I am curious to see how things will turn out. And maybe, in spite of myself, I root for the protagonist because the author/director has made them irresistible.
Given my limited tolerance for this type of fiction, you might wonder why I got this book, let alone why I read it to the end. I had seen a synopsis and it seemed to be close in theme to my forthcoming novel, Nuda proprietà. A woman is desperate for a house in a very tight market. How far will she go? SPOILER ALERT: In Kashino’s book, she will go all the way. To be sure, statistically, women aren’t killers so if you write one, you may find yourself having to explain a certain pathological origin story, an anomaly, or a circumstance that leads to the act. In the case of Best Offer Wins, the circumstances are external. The burning desire for a home (and possibly a baby, although that is secondary) in the post-COVID inflationary DC market is powerful that the reader doesn’t require the kind of analysis of motivation one finds in other crime fiction. There is a degree of the comic here, and Kashino handles it perfectly. It’s the kind of book I might wish I could write, but I don’t have the ability to do so.
When I was working on my book about a 1953 Italian crime, the Montesi Scandal, I had to contend with the question of a resolution to the case. A few possible scenarios: 1. There was information out there that I could have tried to pry from some of the protagonists who were elderly or dead at the time of my own research. But this was the period I came to realize that unlike Kashino, I am not a journalist. I hate asking questions and I am embarrassed by answers. 2. There was information out there that I could have sought in archives. Long story for when we see each other in person: No. 3. There was no information out there but I could make up a resolution to the case. This was suggested to me by a producer in Hollywood (who also said that so many names ending in vowels would be difficult for a US audience), where I lived at the time. It would mean a fictionalization of the case, which would be difficult for an academic book but it might help me sell a treatment or even a novel. But I wasn’t able to do this, at least not at the time. I would have had to make a decision and that would have meant excluding others.
Best Offer Wins achieves closure in a way that I envy. You should not be surprised to find it serialized on a streaming platform of your choice, soon.
Here is the opening to my new novel in progress, Swans Do Not Eat Candy. As you might note, this one begins in a setting closer to my own formation and it draws on some of my experiences in very oblique ways, but it is NOT about my own childhood and it is NOT autofiction. In fact, I don’t think I could write in the first person. I won’t say never, but not now. Please do get in touch if you want to discuss or read more.
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